Mini Lesson: Self-editing
By Janice Seagraves
I went through three edits last year, and every editor told me the same thing, don’t repeat yourself.
So I’m passing this on to you.
Make a list of your pet words. Look through your MS for words you use too often. They can be a word or how you describe something: he/she frowned, jerked up or jerked away, turned around, turned to look, looked over shoulder, and squeezed arm/hand.
Don’t eliminate these words, but check to see if you’ve used them too often, and if you have, then substitute another word or phrase.
Also use more descriptive words. Simply left clicking on the mouse will bring up a list, find synonyms and then locate a word that suits the situation you’re describing. You can also use a thesaurus, or what I use, a Flip Dictionary.
🙂 Excellent tip! We all have our pet words or actions we go to. A lot of time, especially for pantsters it is a result of writing fast to get the story down, but during the revision process these things can be addressed.
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Thank you, Tamara.
I’m a panster and I’m guilty of that too. I tend to write fast and revise slow.
Janice~
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Great advise. Thanks for posting this. : )
Lynda
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You’re welcome, Lynda. 🙂
Janice~
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Flip dictionary? I’ll have to look that one up 🙂
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Hi Andrea,
You can find it on Amazon. I love mine. In fact I wore the first one out and had to buy a new one.
Janice~
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It’s funny but my editor notices this too about me. She sees when I use a word too many times in a paragraph. I use the thesaurus feature a lot when writing but it is a great tool when editing as well. 🙂
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Hi Melissa,
I agree, but sometimes you still have to look a word up, so you not overusing the replacement words. 🙂
Janice~
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I have the same problem. I’ll have to see what the Flip dictionary is. I also use the thesaurus.
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Hi, Janice. What is the flip dictionary? I use word counter. I put in up to 5,000 words and it counts all of them, narrowing down to the top 25, or 50. They I go back and revise. This really makes me use my noggin.
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Hi Vicki,
A flip dictionary is similar to a thesaurus, but you can look up words faster and it’s not as confusing to use.
Janice~
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Thanks for the tip, Janice. I use a software program called autocrit, which generates actual reports for overused words, repetitive phrases, cliches and more. It’s an arduous task going through the whole manuscript with the reports but it forces me to see my weaknesses, use more vivid language and stronger verbs, and cleans up my manuscript before sending it off to editors. It saves them time and me money!
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Hi PJ,
I think I’ve heard of that. I’ve used grammarly to help me with some of the grammar.
Janice~
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Words of wisdom we all need to remember. Thanks for the reminder Janice! I’m off to Amazon to check out flip dictionary because I never heard of it.
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Hi Gemma,
You’re welcome. I hope you enjoy the flip dictionary.
Janice~
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I’ve never heard of a flip dictionary either. Will have to try look into it. Good advice, Janice.
Have a great day!
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Hi Rose,
You’re welcome. I’ve enjoyed using mine and keep it next to me when I write.
Janice~
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I have a huge list of words that are my go to words that I edit out after I write a chapter. Great post.
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Hi Victoria,
That’s a good idea. We all have our pet words to we need to watch out for.
Janice~
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Good tips. I also use free editing programs like EditMinion.com and ProWritingAid.com once I’m all finished with edits to fine tune the wip.
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Hi Calisa,
Thank you. I use grammerly. I haven’t heard of those programs. I might look into them. 🙂
Janice~
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I’m a little late on this post, but thanks for the tip. New to the writing game so I can use all the tips I can get.
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Hi Elizabeth,
You’re welcome. I started late too. 🙂
Hang in there and stay stubborn.
Janice~
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