Mini Lesson: Self-editing
By Janice Seagraves
I went through three edits last year, and every editor told me the same thing, don’t repeat yourself.
So I’m passing this on to you.
Make a list of your pet words. Look through your MS for words you use too often. They can be a word or how you describe something: he/she frowned, jerked up or jerked away, turned around, turned to look, looked over shoulder, and squeezed arm/hand.
Don’t eliminate these words, but check to see if you’ve used them too often, and if you have, then substitute another word or phrase.
Also use more descriptive words. Simply left clicking on the mouse will bring up a list, find synonyms and then locate a word that suits the situation you’re describing. You can also use a thesaurus, or what I use, a Flip Dictionary.